If Someone Loves Someone Nobody Can’t Get Into It, And Well My Family And Friends Don’t Have The Right To Tell Me Who I Need To Love Because I’m Going To Be The One Who’s Going To Leave With It All My Life And Plus They Don’t Know If I’m Always Going To Be With That Person, Neither Can’t Suggest Who I Can Be With Or Who Can I Not Be With Because Its My Choice Who I Pick For My Husband For The Whole Future.
Our Society Has Changed Because Now In Days Parents Don’t Like We Love Or They Say He Is Not The Right One For You, Parents Just Want To See Us Happy With The Person We Love Or We Want To Share A Whole Life Time With. Yes My Parents Play A Role On Who I Love Because I Would Want My Parents And Him To Get Along With Each other So When There’s Family Parties Or Some Thing He Can Be With All Of The Family And My Friends Yes Because They Want To See Me Happy With Some One Who Can And Will Make Me Happy.
Love Is All We See Know In Days And Broken Hearts Every Day Too.
I will like to say that you should turn this into a paragraph. Also, where are the periods? There is one but can there be more. The topic and words are good. But you just need to put it into sentences and then a paragraph. It's good otherwise.
ReplyDeleteI Agree With You That Parents Should Always Have A Role In Your Love lIfe Because They Should Know WHo Your Going Tp Marry And Make Sure That They Like Him, And I Also Agree And How We Both Think Alike That " People " Shouldn't Suggest Who Your Going To Marry Simply For The Fact That Its Going To Be You Marrying Him Not Them.
ReplyDeleteIt's pretty good but don't capitalize each word!
ReplyDeleteAbrham Perez: Ohk...
ReplyDeleteRosa Perez: Yes Its True Because Common They Are Not The Ones Who Are Going To Love Them<3
Birri: Thank Yhuu Thank Yhuu!<3